User contributions for Septegram

8 June 2024

• 08:3208:32, 8 June 2024diff hist +4‎ Motobécane‎ →‎Cars: Add relevant WikilinkTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 08:2608:26, 8 June 2024diff hist +12‎ DAF Trucks‎ →‎Car business: Add relevant Wikilinks.currentTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 May 2024

• 14:5214:52, 16 May 2024diff hist −34‎ Steve Belkin‎ →‎Biography: This is a different "Trans National Communications." The link leads to a company that makes no mention of Belkin and is headquartered in New York rather than Massachusetts.current

27 April 2024

• 06:4406:44, 27 April 2024diff hist −1‎ Hamas‎ →‎Second Intifada: Copyedit image caption from "Intifiada" to "Intifada."Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 March 2024

• 09:0409:04, 5 March 2024diff hist 0‎ The High Ground (Star Trek: The Next Generation)‎ →‎Plot: Copyedit to remove incorrect / superfluous hyphen. "A short-term solution" would be an appropriate use of a hyphen, but "in the short-term" is not.Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 January 2024

• 03:3103:31, 23 January 2024diff hist −44‎ Killing of Tony Timpa‎ →‎Legal proceedings: Remove superseded text.

1 January 2024

• 23:3123:31, 1 January 2024diff hist 0‎ List of screw drives‎ →‎Spanner: Copyedit, change a comma between two related sentences that could stand alone into a semicolon.Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 December 2023

• 09:2009:20, 9 December 2023diff hist +1‎ Assault on Wall Street‎ →‎Plot: Copyedit: corrected "best-interest" to "best interests."Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 November 2023

• 12:1112:11, 29 November 2023diff hist 0‎ Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan‎ →‎Reception: Copyedit: removed superfluous/incorrect dashes. Correct usage would be "gave it a three-and-a-half star review," but not "gave it three-and-a-half stars."Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 November 2023

• 02:4902:49, 22 November 2023diff hist 0‎ Even Lambs Have Teeth‎ →‎Plot: Copyedit: to black out is a verb. "Blackout" is a noun.Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 November 2023

• 14:1014:10, 9 November 2023diff hist −18‎ Cruiser rules‎ →‎History: Removed superfluous dash from "Laconia incident."Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 October 2023

• 09:2709:27, 17 October 2023diff hist −5‎ Tor (network)‎ →‎2018: Rephrase for slight improvement in readability.Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 09:2509:25, 17 October 2023diff hist +1‎ Tor (network)‎ →‎2017: Copyedit; add comma for clarity.Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 September 2023

• 13:0113:01, 17 September 2023diff hist +3‎ Unrotated Projectile‎ Copyedit for slight improvement in grammar.Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 12:5112:51, 17 September 2023diff hist 0‎ Prince Eugene of Savoy‎ →‎Personal life: Copyedit: adding the missing hyphen to "seventy-two."Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

25 July 2023

• 14:3314:33, 25 July 2023diff hist −28‎ The Juniper Tree (fairy tale)‎ →‎Synopsis: Remove unnecessary exposition. This information is provided a sentence or two previously.Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 April 2023

• 15:4215:42, 14 April 2023diff hist +95‎ Jet fighter generations‎ →‎Sixth generation (2020s): Add relevant reference to semi-autonomous drone "wingmen."Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 February 2023

• 12:4712:47, 5 February 2023diff hist +6‎ Elles (film)‎ →‎Production: Rephrase for slightly more encyclopedic toneTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 December 2022

• 03:5103:51, 5 December 2022diff hist 0‎ The Tin Man (novel)‎ Copyedit incorrect capitalizationTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 October 2022

• 17:0017:00, 19 October 2022diff hist +1‎ Suits (American TV series)‎ →‎Spin-off: Copyedit for tenseTags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 September 2022

• 13:2513:25, 15 September 2022diff hist 0‎ Playgirl‎ →‎History: The W3C convention is for URLs to be all lowercase.Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 July 2022

• 18:0418:04, 29 July 2022diff hist −10‎ mRolling Thunder (video game)‎ NPOV

9 June 2022

• 13:5313:53, 9 June 2022diff hist +115‎ Henry Selby Hele-Shaw‎ Clarification needed
• 13:4713:47, 9 June 2022diff hist +121‎ Hele-Shaw clutch‎ →‎Description: Citation absolutely needed. In the unlikely event this is true, Professor Hele-Shaw's name still needs to be spelled correctly. I found no case where the name has an accented e ("é").
• 13:4313:43, 9 June 2022diff hist +5‎ Hele-Shaw clutch‎ →‎Description: Tidying up grammar, slight change for NPOV
• 13:3213:32, 9 June 2022diff hist −21‎ mJames Kirk diploma mills‎ →‎History: Remove superfluous repetitions of detail. Minor punctuation/grammar change.

7 June 2022

• 15:4615:46, 7 June 2022diff hist −21‎ Caprera‎ →‎History: Change phrasing slightly for more NPOV tone. Add capitalization to book title.

1 June 2022

• 17:5617:56, 1 June 2022diff hist 0‎ mComputer cooling‎ →‎Heat-sinks: Tidying up punctuation

18 May 2022

• 19:3919:39, 18 May 2022diff hist +411‎ Talk:New Age‎ →‎Invisible Text: new sectionTag: Reverted

17 May 2022

• 15:4815:48, 17 May 2022diff hist −3‎ New Age‎ Changing hidden text to section headings.Tag: Reverted
• 15:4315:43, 17 May 2022diff hist +30‎ New Age‎ Undid revision 1088243629 by Editor2020 (talk) These seem to be mis-coded section headings. I will mark them as such.Tag: Undo

13 May 2022

• 13:4913:49, 13 May 2022diff hist −2‎ Jarret Brachman‎ →‎Education and career: Corrected misspelling of Dr. Brachman's name

1 May 2022

• 16:1416:14, 1 May 2022diff hist −4‎ mSteven Mnuchin‎ →‎Comments on Lego Batman movie: Copyedit grammar. Change subsequent sentence to be slightly tighter.

29 April 2022

• 19:1719:17, 29 April 2022diff hist +38‎ mMetal foam‎ →‎Hybrid foam: Add relevant wikilink

21 April 2022

• 10:2510:25, 21 April 2022diff hist 0‎ Lockheed Martin F-35 Lightning II‎ Copyedit: remove superfluous / incorrect hyphen. "A shot-down aircraft" is correct; "they shot-down the enemy" is not.Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

31 March 2022

• 14:0014:00, 31 March 2022diff hist +273‎ NUser talk:2409:4041:D9C:6199:0:0:404B:480F‎ ←Created page with 'Hi; you posted something on my page, but I'm not sure what you were trying to say. ~~~~'current

30 March 2022

• 14:2114:21, 30 March 2022diff hist +665‎ Talk:Public adjuster‎ →‎Copyvio: new section
• 14:1614:16, 30 March 2022diff hist −115‎ Public adjuster‎ Add relevant wikilink. Remove explanatory text. Rework some of the text for more neutral tone. Frankly, this smells of copyvio, but I don't have time to work on that now.

28 March 2022

• 15:3115:31, 28 March 2022diff hist −8‎ mScram‎ →‎Mechanisms: Only one link per subject is required.
• 14:2714:27, 28 March 2022diff hist +210‎ User:Septegram/notes‎ →‎To Do: Updating notescurrent

25 March 2022

• 13:0213:02, 25 March 2022diff hist −3‎ Lady Sheba‎ Remove superfluous/incorrect apostrophe (eyeroll). Change "intended" to "tended;" the material wasn't something that all other Wiccans wanted to keep secret, just most of them.

24 March 2022

• 15:2815:28, 24 March 2022diff hist +2‎ mPelham, Massachusetts‎ →‎Education: Copyedit change "1" to "one" MOS
• 15:2615:26, 24 March 2022diff hist +48‎ User:Septegram/notes‎ →‎To Do

18 March 2022

• 14:5814:58, 18 March 2022diff hist −33‎ Minneapolis, North Carolina‎ Remove superfluous citation request. It's intuitively obvious that a town of under 500 people is barely notable and definitely less famous than the largest city in Minnesota. Added population data from city-data.com/township/Minneapolis-Avery-NC.html, although I can't include it as a citation; Wikipedia seems to think it's a spam site.

17 March 2022

• 16:4216:42, 17 March 2022diff hist −13‎ mWicca‎ Removing superfluous "BTW"s. Once the abbreviation is defined, it is not necessary to keep doing so.
• 16:4016:40, 17 March 2022diff hist −4‎ mWicca‎ "BTW" links to a disambiguation page, and does not need a link because the full phrase is linked in the words immediately preceding the abbreviation.

9 March 2022

• 14:3914:39, 9 March 2022diff hist +4‎ mGuntō‎ →‎History: Add relevant wikilink
• 14:2914:29, 9 March 2022diff hist −10‎ Puyi‎ →‎Puppet ruler of Manchukuo (1932–1945): "Since then" carries the implication of something continuing to the present. This better describes the situation. Remove unnecessary redirect for Kenpeitai.

2 March 2022

• 18:3218:32, 2 March 2022diff hist +11‎ Modern paganism‎ →‎Late 20th century: Add relevant wikilink. Remove superfluous "the." Remove reference to Paganism as a religion, since it is an "umbrella" term covering any number of religions.

23 February 2022

• 12:0212:02, 23 February 2022diff hist +133‎ Weather Underground‎ Add relevant citation. I'm using an unfamiliar tool, so I apologize if I didn't format this as well as I might have normally.Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit