How to Write a Hamburger Paragraph

Writing a thorough but effective paragraph can be hard, especially if you're still learning some techniques for structuring your writing. The hamburger paragraph technique is easy to remember and easy to use; it offers a "recipe" for writing full and "meaty" paragraphs. Get started a step number one.

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The topic sentence should tell you what the paragraph is about. For example, if you were writing about your best friend your topic sentence might be something like this: "Allie is a really great friend."^{[1]XResearch source}
The tomato is going to be a detail. A detail should some how connect with the topic sentence. An example is: "Allie is always there for me, no matter what."^{[2]XTrustworthy SourceReading RocketsOnline resource supported by PBS providing research-based strategies for assisting children to become confident readersGo to source}
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The cheese is going to be another detail that connects with the topic sentence. An example is; "Allie is a really good friend because she helps me with my homework."^{[3]XResearch source}
The burger is just another detail that connects with the topic sentence. An example is: "Allie is lots of fun when we play together."^{[4]XResearch source}
An example is: "Allie is a really good friend because she makes me happy when I am sad."^{[5]XResearch source}
The onions will be the last detail that connects with the topic sentence. An example is: "Allie shares her lunch with me, when I forget mine."^{[6]XResearch source}
It will wrap up the whole paragraph. An example is: "I am really glad Allie is my friend and I would not be the person I am today without her."^{[7]XTrustworthy SourceReading RocketsOnline resource supported by PBS providing research-based strategies for assisting children to become confident readersGo to source}
Here's our example in all its glory. Allie is a really great friend. Allie is always there for me, no matter what. Allie is a really good friend because she helps me with my homework. Allie is lots of fun when we play together. Allie is a really good friend because she makes me happy when I am sad. Allie shares her lunch with me, when I forget mine. I am really glad Allie is my friend and I would not be the person I am today without her.If you think your paragraph is of a similar structure and quality as this example, well done, you've written a hamburger paragraph.
My friend Allie is really great, always there for me when I need her, no matter what. If I need help with my homework, Allie helps me. We have fun playing together too, lots of fun. Allie always makes me happy whenever I am sad, even if I am sad because I'm hungry! Allie shares her lunch with me if I have forgotten mine. I am really glad Allie is my friend: I would not be the person I am today without her.

Which paragraph do you think is better?^{[8]XTrustworthy SourceReading RocketsOnline resource supported by PBS providing research-based strategies for assisting children to become confident readersGo to source}

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Is the following paragraph an example of a hamburger paragraph? "Christmas is time to enjoy. I spend time with my family. For Christmas and Three Kings Day, I got a Barbie a Lol doll, and a car."
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It is not, because you don't have a conclusion. The template is: topic sentence, 1 - 3 supporting sentences, conclusion. You got the first two parts, but not the conclusion. So you could wrap it up with "Spending time with my family and receiving presents turned my Christmas into a joyful time."
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What should all the details in a paragraph do?
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They should provide cumulative (added) information about the main topic.
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What is the main topic of the paragraph example?
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The main topic is stated quite well in the topic sentence. The paragraph is about Allie and the reasons she is a great friend.
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If you are having problems remembering how to write a hamburger paragraph, draw a picture of the hamburger and on each part either write "Topic Sentence", "Detail," or "Closing Sentence".
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