How to Begin Writing a Good Action Novel

It is said that everybody has a novel in them. The problem is, you have to start writing if the world is ever going to read your novel. Action novels, with their zippy action and high-risk pursuits, can seem particularly daunting, but it's time to take action and start that novel.

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Planning Your Novel

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Write down your idea. Before you start writing, you should have a general idea of what you want to write about. While you don’t need the specifics yet, try writing down your idea in a single sentence. By limiting your grand aspirations to a single line, you can refine story and focus your main conflict. ^{[1]XResearch source}
- You don't want to have a topic that causes people to cease reading your novel within five seconds. An action novel should introduce conflict as soon as possible so the reader is hooked.
- Come up with a protagonist that readers will want to root for. Make them relatable so the audience connects with them right away.
- Make sure you have a new perspective to write about. You don't need to come up with a story idea that no one has ever heard of before, but you do want to tell your story with your own unique voice.
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Research. In action novels, it is a good idea to know the different types of weaponry, vehicles, and technology that will be used throughout the book. You should familiarize yourself with the application and practicality of various guns, military services, survival techniques, computer programs, and combat styles. This will make your writing more precise, and it will help you hammer out those tricky action scenes later. ^{[2]XResearch source}
- Places you can use for research include museums, libraries, and archives. If your book involves technical knowledge, try contacting an expert about the subject area. University websites, newspapers, and government agencies can be a good source of information on who to contact.^{[3]XExpert SourceGrant Faulkner, MA
  Professional WriterExpert Interview. 8 January 2019.}
- While it is good to research as much as possible, you don’t need to include all of your research in your book. Too much information will overwhelm the reader. ^{[4]XResearch source} Decide what is necessary as you write your novel.
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Travel to similar locations. Maybe your story is a globetrotting adventure, or maybe it is set in your hometown. If you are able to, try visiting the locations you plan to write about. During your visit, record important details about the scenery. What is the climate like? Where are the major streets and landmarks? Engage all of your senses: what does it smell like? What can you see? How noisy is it? What kind of sounds do you hear?^{[5]XExpert SourceGrant Faulkner, MA
Professional WriterExpert Interview. 8 January 2019.}
- Perhaps you can't afford a trip to Mount Everest, but you can visit a local mountain. Or perhaps you don't have time to visit Miami, but there is a beach close to you. You can still do on-site research without traveling across the world.
Mind map your ideas. This technique is great for visual writers. Try writing your main conflict in the middle of a sheet of paper. Trace a circle around it. Draw lines for each major event or catalyst off this center circle and write them down. As ideas come to you about your novel, draw more lines that show how these ideas connect to your larger narrative. Lines can interconnect, zigzag, or even branch off into other circles. Your mind map can resemble a web, a tree, or even a spreadsheet. ^{[6]XResearch source} ^{[7]XResearch source}
Outlines not only sketch out the main action before you write your novel but can help you identify problems with the plot ahead of time. Write a list of the events of your novel as they happen. These headings should be short descriptors of each scene. Bullet points and subsections can record the details of each scene, such as which characters are present, where the action takes place, and how the action resolves.
Record each plot event on a notecard. On a table, arrange the notecards so that you can visualize the entire plot. Reorganize the notecards as you brainstorm. You can move around events or reorder certain scenes. When you are ready to put the notecards away, be careful to keep them in their proper sequence, so that next time you need to consult them, they are already arranged correctly.
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Use the snowflake method. Write your idea down in a single sentence. Once you are done, expand that single sentence into a paragraph that describes the main conflict, important events and obstacles, and the ending. Slowly expand your synopsis, first from one paragraph to one page and then from one page to four pages. Keep adding to this synopsis until you are ready to begin writing the novel itself. ^{[8]XResearch source}
- The snowflake method can help make the writing process a little less intimidating so it's easier to get started.^{[9]XResearch source}
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Draft profiles for each character. To write convincing characters, you should know every detail of their lives.^{[10]XExpert SourceGrant Faulkner, MA
Professional WriterExpert Interview. 8 January 2019.} Write a summary or list for each character that notes their physical characteristics, history, motivations, relationships, personality traits, habits, and flaws. Important questions include: ^{[11]XResearch source}
- Ask yourself how your character moves and speaks.
- What skills does this character possess that make them useful through the book? Are they skilled in a particular fighting technique? Can they hack computers or fly a helicopter? How did they develop this skill? Do they have experience in the military or a tragic past?
- Why is this character invested in the events of this book? What motivates them to participate in the action? What is at stake for them?
- How does this character deal with anger? How does this character deal with tragedy? What about fear, disgust, excitement, or danger?
- How does this character treat those they love? How does this character treat those they hate?
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Keep an idea journal. Always have a notebook on hand for when inspiration strikes. Write down intriguing details as they come to you. As you research, keep detailed notes on everything you find. Later, when you are at your desk, you can use this journal as a reference.
- You can also keep track of your ideas by recording them in an app on your phone.

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Freewrite. Freewriting is a process in which you sit down and write whatever is on your mind for fifteen minutes.^{[12]XExpert SourceGrant Faulkner, MA
Professional WriterExpert Interview. 8 January 2019.} You can ignore grammar, punctuation, or even logic. During this time, your pen should always be moving. This process helps start you writing and overcome the mental mind blocks that prevent you from beginning. ^{[13]XResearch source}
- Freewriting doesn’t have to be about your novel. In fact, if you are distracted, freewriting about your distractions can help clear your mind so that you can focus on your novel.
- You can find prompts for freewriting at https://creativewritingprompts.com/ and https://www.writersdigest.com/.
There are plenty of websites, books, and forums that offer writing prompts to start the creative juices flowing. These can give you a starting place for writing your story.^{[14]XExpert SourceGrant Faulkner, MA
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Write a snappy opening. The first few lines or hook of a book is especially important in action novels. A strong opening will introduce the action without overwhelming the reader with too much description, dialogue, or exposition. ^{[15]XResearch source} There a few different types of effective hooks.
- Introduce a character. The character should be doing something important. You don’t have to describe their personality or physical appearance yet.
- Open with dialogue. An enticing line of dialogue can be the perfect way to begin a novel. It introduces a character while making a statement about their situation.
- Begin with a bang. Your story might open with a catastrophic event or disaster which your hero has to solve.
- Don’t get hung up on the opening. While it can be helpful to begin with the first sentences, if you are having difficulty with the beginning, feel free to move forward. Maybe the perfect opening will come to you later.
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Start with action. In an action novel, this may be the most effective way to begin writing the story. In the opening lines, something should happen. There can be an explosion, a burglary, or a murder. Your character can be answering the phone, driving, or in pursuit. The action does not have to be necessarily about the main event, so long as it reveals something about the main character or conflict. ^{[16]XResearch source}
- You can also begin in the middle of the action. Perhaps a series of murders just occurred, and police just found the latest victim. Perhaps you open during a high speed car chase after a crime that has been committed. Regardless, you can begin in the middle of an exciting event but before the main conflict begins.
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Write ten scenes. Pick the ten most important scenes of your novel. These will be the backbone of your story. Your first scene should be the opening scene. The second and third scenes should mark the point of no return for your protagonist. The next several scenes should build up to the climax, around scene seven or eight, and the last scenes should wind down the action to its resolution.
- It may help if you map out your scenes using a scene list. A scene list can be made up of detailed descriptions of each scene that include a 1-2 sentence summary of the scene, how long the scene is going to be, and what point of view it's being written from.
After you write a few major scenes, fill in the blanks between these chapters. How does the character get from Point A to Point B? Where do the characters find the weapons or tools that allow them to overcome the antagonist? How do the characters unravel the mystery at the heart of these major scenes?

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Making a Writing Schedule

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Plan time to write every day. By writing a little bit every day, you will quickly start a habit, and when you sit down to write your novel, the words will flow more easily. Set a time when you are able to write consistently every day.^{[17]XExpert SourceGrant Faulkner, MA
Professional WriterExpert Interview. 8 January 2019.} You may want to set a word quota for the day or week that you force yourself to reach.
- Some writers find it easier to write in the early morning or late at night. ^{[18]XResearch source} Experiment with your schedule to find the ideal time for yourself.
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Join a writing circle. There are plenty of groups and clubs that meet to discuss their writing. These groups can encourage you to keep writing, provide constructive feedback, and support you when you’re struggling You might even find a group that focuses exclusively on action novels. If you can’t find a local writing circle, start one yourself!
- When your novel is finished, your writing circle can even help you network and find publishing opportunities.^{[19]XExpert SourceGrant Faulkner, MA
  Professional WriterExpert Interview. 8 January 2019.}
Every week, write a checklist of your goals. These goals should be reasonable. How many words do you want to write by Friday? What scenes do you want to finish? Are you struggling with a particular character or part of the novel? As you complete these goals, check them off your list.

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Overcoming Writer’s Block

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Step away from your notebook or computer to rest. Distract yourself for thirty minutes with another activity. Cook dinner. Freewrite. Make some phone calls. Watch an episode of your favorite TV show. It is particularly helpful to engage in other creative activities. You can draw a picture, play an instrument, knit, or make a scrapbook. Whatever you do, don’t think about your novel for this period of time. When you return to your manuscript, you should be refreshed.
Writing can be an isolated practice. If you are struggling with a particular aspect of your novel, ask a friend to sit down with you for 30 minutes and discuss your project. Just the process of speaking can help your brain work through your problems, and your friend might be able to give you helpful advice. ^{[20]XResearch source}
Exercise has been shown to increase productivity. People who regularly exercise also demonstrate higher levels of creativity. Since you are writing an action novel, it might be helpful to go out and be active!
Imagine you are your protagonist. How would you act in this situation? As you go about your day, imagine what they would do in your place. If you are a runner, imagine you are running away from your antagonist or are involved in a high-speed chase. If you enjoy hiking, you can imagine one of your characters is lost in the woods. Keep your journal nearby and record these experiences as soon as possible.
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Make yourself sit down and write anyway. Sometimes, the best way to overcome writer's block is to force yourself to start writing. It doesn't have to be good, the point is to just get yourself writing again. When you're finished, you might even find parts of your writing that you like and want to keep for your story!

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How can I make the fictional world of my action novel seem real?
Grant Faulkner, MA
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Grant Faulkner is the Executive Director of National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) and the co-founder of 100 Word Story, a literary magazine. Grant has published two books on writing and has been published in The New York Times and Writer’s Digest. He co-hosts Write-minded, a weekly podcast on writing and publishing, and has a M.A. in Creative Writing from San Francisco State University.
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It's a matter of studying your physical world or fictional world. If your fictional world takes place in a hospital, for instance, go spend some time in the hospital and take notes. It's amazing what going there and observing the setting will do in helping you catch all those precise details.
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You can reveal a lot about characters through dialogue. Their names, their thoughts, their feelings. It's much more interesting and engaging for the reader than to simply read a description of a person. Great dialogue brings characters to life.
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How can I start the action in my story? I usually start it too quick and I can never seem to get it right.
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Think about how it all led up to this huge action scene or whatever you had in your mind. Then, write a page or two about it as a free write, and then take it from there. If that's not really your style, maybe write about what happened seconds before this action scene, add some good description and dialogue and maybe some observations the main character had.
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Reading other action novels can give you a sense of the conventions of the genre. While you shouldn’t plagiarize other novels, you can get inspiration for your own book by reading. Not only does reading improve your writing skills but it can increase overall cognitive function.
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The first draft does not have to be perfect. Editing and rewriting occur at the end of the process, not at the beginning. Try not to worry about perfect grammar or beautiful language at the beginning; you can always return to your first draft and improve your style later. The most important thing to do is put your ideas down on paper.
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You can write scenes out of order if it helps. There is no rule that starts you must start writing your novel at the first scene. Write what comes to you first before going back and filling in the blanks.
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Writing can be hard. Don’t get discouraged by negative feedback. Use it to improve your story in the next round of revisions. All great writers edit and rewrite.
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If you don’t keep a regular writing schedule, you may find that it is difficult to return to writing consistently. Don’t abandon your novel. Read your idea journal and freewrite to put you back into the creative mindset.
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Writer’s block may seem impossible to overcome, but the easiest way to surpass it is by forcing yourself to write anyways. Try freewriting, writing prompts, and short scenes before working your way back up to writing whole chapters. ^{[21]XResearch source}
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